Answer:
A tear rolled down the side of her face as she remembered the haunting sounds of the dog's vicious barks.
Explanation:
This is likely the feeling which the character (she) experienced because, she felt haunted due to the fact that, she remembered the vicious barking of the dog. The sound of the dog's bark makes her to tremble.
To make any plain sentence like the one given more "dazzling", the first thing that comes to mind is perhaps using stronger adjectives that call attention to an otherwise dull action such as a person walking down the street. Also we could reveal some detail about the character or what she's feeling or thinking in order to embed the sentence with more meaning. I'll give you an example:
<u>Sandra found herself profoundly submerged in the tediousness of her routine as she started walking across the street, without noticing the red light.</u>
Hope this helps!
Answer:
"brings tears to my eyes"
Explanation:
That phrase would be considered an emotional bias from the author ("brings tears") and is referring to themselves (using "my"), which is looked down upon in academic tone.
