The revision which would most improve sentence 7 is the one that follows:
Suggest an alternative plan to replace the current school calendar. Explain why it is outdated and inefficient. Express an opinion about those who oppose changing it. Restate the strongest piece of evidence used to support the claim.
Comments: The paragraph above contains instructions for a school assignment or something like that. Since there were instructions, it was necessary to change the verbs from "ing" form to imperative (used to give orders, commands,instructions). Punctuation had to be changed as well: a few pauses were added, and that was done with periods (.). In order to make it less repetitive, it was the right choice to replace "the current school calendar" with the pronoun "it" (third person singular) from the second time we talked about "the current school calendar" on.
Literature and the Holocaust have a complicated relationship. This isn't to say, of course, that the pairing isn't a fruitful one—the Holocaust has influenced, if not defined, nearly every Jewish writer since, from Saul Bellow to Jonathan Safran Foer, and many non-Jews besides, like W.G. Sebald and Jorge Semprun. Still, literature qua art—innately concerned with representation and appropriation—seemingly stands opposed to the immutability of the Holocaust and our oversized obligations to its memory. Good literature makes artistic demands, flexes and contorts narratives, resists limpid morality, compromises reality's details. Regarding the Holocaust, this seems unconscionable, even blasphemous. The horrors of Auschwitz and Buchenwald need no artistic amplification.
Answer:
On a deserted island, I would miss : my best friend, some mode of entertainment, the places i used to chill at near my home (residence).
Explanation:
Spending time at deserted places can cause contrasting mixed feelings, of self solitude with missing up.
If I were on a deserted island, I would miss my best friend the most. I would wish that she could be with me & we could spend quality time. Materially, I would miss my laptop & internet, so that there is some source of external entertainment, specially music. Place missed by me would be the places near my home, where I used to chill earlier.
Answer:
Leads to dull and dry skin
Makes one moody and cranky
Explanation:
The answer is, "Sometimes the desire to have it all makes some decisions very difficult."
