Answer:
Multiple areas for improvement have been identified by Roberts team.
I rushed to the door to see what loud noise i heard, I seen a strange man standing on top of a body. As I screamed loudly, he started rushing towards me. “Please don’t kill me!” , i said as he pulled the knife out and touched my neck with it. He then began to slice my neck and I started to bleed out and collapsed on my front door. I suddenly woke up and realized it was all a dream, I went back to sleep.
Eventually, the Romans used the umbrella to protect themselves from the rain and sun.
1. There has to be a conjunction between "important," and "other" because otherwise, the sentence doesn't seem coherent. You can place 'but' between those words to make it correct, and to connect the two ideas into one sentence.
2. The phrase 'such as journal entries and poetry' should be placed after 'period' because otherwise, it is located too far from the word it is supposed to describe. So, 'fiction from that time period, such as journal entries and poetry, can be just as valuable.'
3. Again, there should be a conjunction between the words 'read' and 'they' because the way this sentence is written, it doesn't seem connected. You can write either '...are interesting to read because they give..." or '...to read as they give...'
