The statement which best describes the mistake the writer makes in the paragraph is the following one:
The writer loses focus and shifts to another topic.
He starts off by pointing out the overall benefits of exercising, and supports his idea by also giving examples of activities people should engage in. However, focus is lost when the writer begins to address the importance of a balanced diet to the body. That would require a new paragraph.
Answer: By adding closing sentence
Explanation:
The introduction will be more effective if the writer would add a closing sentence. The main idea of closing sentences is to establish and restates the most important thing about the argumentative essay, to show what are the key and the main idea of that essay.
This introduction needs strength and stable information because these pieces of information are incomplete and they are left hanging. Because it is the argumentative essay it would be good to be clear about what the author is arguing and what is he trying to describe.
<span>If a poet wanted to draw upon a theme most
people are already familiar with, the poet would need to consider what is
universal among humanity. When we think about
what is common to people some possibilities are that we know that everyone is
born, everyone must eat, everyone must sleep, and everyone dies. With that in mind the poet might consider
drawing upon birth, hunger, sleep, or death.
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The order of events in Ivan Ilyich's life is: (1) Ivan Ilyich graduates from the School of Law and qualifies for the tenth rank of the civil service, (2) Ivan Ilyich is offered the post of examining magistrate in a Russian province, (3) Ivan Ilyich becomes assistant public prosecutor, a position that he serves in for seven years, (4) Ivan Ilyich becomes a public prosecutor and is transferred to another province, and (5) Ivan Ilyich meets Zachar Ivanovich in St. Petersburg and receives a guaranteed appointment in the Department of Justice.
<em>The Death of Ivan Ilyich </em>is a novel written by Leo Tolstoy in 1886.<u> The main character of the book is Ivan Ilyich, a high-court judge that is forced to deal with a terminal illness</u>. Other characters are Ivan Ilyich's wife, Praskovya Fëdorovna Golovin, who does not care about her husband's suffering, and Peter Ivanovich, Ivan's unconditional friend. <em>The Death of Ivan Ilyich </em>is considered one of the masterpieces of world literature.
Answer:
Doglo is unhappy with the actions of his friend Cathy and tries to chase Cathy for the dog he took but Cathy is too swift and difficult to catch.
Some days later, Cathy sees Doglo and tries to avoid him but it's too late. However, Doglo is not mad at Cathy, he explains to her that if she needs something she can always ask her friends for help instead of stealing.
Cathy is relieved that Doglo is not angry and at the same time remorseful about her actions. She offers to share her biscuits with Doglo and asks for forgiveness. Both friends rekindle the friendship and play around the neighborhood like they used to do.
