The best revision of this sentence is the following:
The lawyer presented a clear argument to the jury (it was unbelievable how influenced they were by his case) in the hopes of winning the trial.
A pair of parentheses needs to be used in order to separate this information from the rest of the sentence and facilitate reading and comprehension. The information in the parentheses is related to the meaning of the sentence but in some way it interrupts the flow, so a pair of parentheses is necessary in order to indicate this.
You have worked five years in technical support
B. They said to others to convince you that b was right
c. the forced door to the birdcage
Mrs. Wright asked Mrs. Peters and Mrs. Hales to go to the farmhouse and collect a few things for her. The trifles began with Mrs. Wrights kitchen described (by the two) as messy and hastily deserted.
The overall summarization of this selection is that Justin helps Becky mentally prepare for her driving test by being thoughtful. The rest of the answers do not summarize the reading selection or capture the theme.