Question

Kyle likes to cook. He cooks meals for his family. Kyle's family always enjoys his cooking. Choose the revision that best varies the sentence pattern without changing the meaning. Kyle and his family always like him to cook meals. Kyle cooks meals for his family that thinks they are yummy. Kyle likes to cook meals for his family, and they enjoy every one. Kyle likes to cook because he cooks for his family that enjoys cooking.

Answer 1

Answer:

The answer is c.

Explanation:

Answer 2

Answer:

The best revision is:

C.  Kyle likes to cook meals for his family, and they enjoy every one.

Explanation:

Notice that this question not only asks us to revise the sentences, but also to maintain their original meaning. There is nothing much concerning the first two, so let's pay attention to the last sentence, "Kyle's family always enjoys his cooking." If Kyle's family ALWAYS enjoys his food, that means they enjoy every one of the meals he cooks. This detail is important, and it is best maintained in option C. Kyle likes to cook meals for his family, and they enjoy every one.