Given:
<span>(2) "Let freedom ring” is a phrase which is used many times in his speech.
(3) "Let freedom ring” is a phrase that leads to an exciting conclusion.
The revised sentence that combines these two is:
</span><span>“Let freedom ring” is a phrase that is used many times to lead to an exciting conclusion.</span>
Prepositions show location, direction and time. They are words that are being used to link phrases, nouns and pronouns in a sentence. They are placed before the phrase that is to be linked. Examples are at, to, in, on, from and the like.
Answer:
The correct option described second is <em>"The tone is the same, but the word choice is less formal, probably for a younger reading audience."</em>
Explanation:
Replacing <em>"of the Victorian era"</em> with <em>"during a period of time known as the Victorian era" </em>shows less formality and a bit more explanation for younger readers.
Also <em>"distinguished" </em>is replaced with <em>"respected"</em> which is less formal and easier to be understood by younger readers.
The replacement of <em>"Her poetry influenced ..... and Emily Dickinson"</em> in first version with this long sentence <em>"Her poetry was very ............. by Ms. Browning"</em> in second version reduces formality to make it easier to understand for younger audience.
Answer:
Appeal to the sense of sight only (how things look) and your writing will lack ... We can also use those words to describe how things feel, smell and taste, too. ... Don't attempt to paint the full picture, describing every tree and building and passing ... I didn't write those sentences descriptively, like I would have done in a novel.
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