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The meadow's water glistened as the sun rised
As the sun rose, the crystal-like water shined
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This statement needs facts and statistics in order to be strengthened.
This statement provides certain information. However, that information lacks veracity, that is, it does not seem reliable or accurate as it lacks facts or statistics to prove and support what is stated.
Statistics are numbers or facts that are implemented to provide convincing information. Thus, the reader wont be able to argue with facts and will feel that statistics will prove what the writer is saying. They are employed to convince a reader and to provide factual weight to an argument.
2. What career will you pursue? (The adolescent will begin stressing about his or her future.)
3. Why is this happening? (Crises are bad no matter the situation, so chances are, we would ask ourselves why this is happening and re-trace the steps.)
In the excerpt from the Declaration of Independence by Thomas Jefferson. He used ethos as a rhetorical appeal
through A. by establishing the source of the representatives’ authority. Ethos is a Greek word that means "character" that is utilized to represent the guiding beliefs or ideals that characterize a community, nation, or ideology.
