"My ideal life in 15 years is me and my wife, sitting on the porch of our lake house watching our kids play. In order to reach that goal i can do great in my classes and follow a significant career path."
Dwaina’s words and actions reveal that she is
determined. In Dwaina Brooks by Allie Morton, Dwaina talked with a young man who had been without a home for a long time. Dwaina talked to many homeless people and then rushes back home. She explaines her plan to her mother of how she would provide the meal to homeless people. Since then, every night Dwaina prepared the meal every Friday night for the homeless shelter in Dallas.
Books and gifts are being compared.
Simile is when you use "like"
Pacing is moving a story forward with a certain speed. So the correct answer should be slow. To slow a scene to the point of using a coma, add a lot of these. Since all of the sentences are relatively long with a lot of commas and all of that slows the tempo down.
