The revision which would most improve sentence 7 is the one that follows:
Suggest an alternative plan to replace the current school calendar. Explain why it is outdated and inefficient. Express an opinion about those who oppose changing it. Restate the strongest piece of evidence used to support the claim.
Comments: The paragraph above contains instructions for a school assignment or something like that. Since there were instructions, it was necessary to change the verbs from "ing" form to imperative (used to give orders, commands,instructions). Punctuation had to be changed as well: a few pauses were added, and that was done with periods (.). In order to make it less repetitive, it was the right choice to replace "the current school calendar" with the pronoun "it" (third person singular) from the second time we talked about "the current school calendar" on.
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The image shows the impressive potential of a just society.
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Answer: The authors provide a primary-source quotation from a British abolitionist named William Wilberforce.
Explanation: It takes some careful reading of the article to match the content of the article with the descriptions in the answer options.
The first option is misleading. The passage mentions "the new bill that would limit British involvement in the slave trade" but there is no detail.
The second option is also misleading. The passage mentions "economic force" but there is no detail.
The fourth option is misleading. The passage mentions "Bristol, a port city with a harbor filled with slave ships" but there is no summary of that article.
The path to the right answer is paying attention to the point of the question: "to support the claim that many people joined the antislavery movement for moral reasons"
The correct answer refers to the sentence " William Wilberforce, another leader of the abolitionist cause, felt the new mood in his country. "God can turn the hearts of men," he marveled." Infer that moral reasons are tied to the notion that God can change hearts.
Answer: Blanca and Harris (owners of the factory) closed all doors in the building so nobody can escape the factory. Citizens then protesting saying Murders! Murders! They killed my child. Then they were found guilty.
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