Answer:
The word choice and style are good, but there are
punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and
The mechanics and organization are good, but
sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal
style and objective tone.
Explanation:
The sentences that contribute to a sense of hope are "<span>She could see in the open square before her house the tops of trees that were all aquiver with the new spring life. The delicious breath of rain was in the air. In the street below a peddler was crying his wares. The notes of a distant song which someone was singing reached her faintly, and countless sparrows were twittering in the eaves. There were patches of blue sky showing here and there through the clouds that had met and piled one above the other in the west facing her window." First of all, she sees trees that are trembling with new life. A peddler was selling his goods. She could hear a distant song which someone was singing, and songs usually mean good spirit in works of literature.
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"You who eat three times a day and see your children well and happy around you cannot understand what a starving Indian feels! We were faint with hunger and maddened by despair. We held our dying children and felt their little bodies tremble as their soul went out and left only a dead weight in our hands. They were not very heavy but we were faint and the dead weighed us down. There was no hope on earth. God seemed to have forgotten."
Answer:
The tone created is that of despair and sadness.
Explanation:
According to paragraph 8 of Red Cloud's speech after wounded knee, he decries the killings of Indians and tries to explain how weak and tired his people were, seeing their young ones dying in their hands.
Red Cloud who was an advocate for peace was distraught and deeply saddened by the treatment of the Indians and the extreme hunger they faced.
Hemingway is preoccupied with
-violence and death-
