Here is a narrative paragraph to illustrate the three tools for coherence, which, in turn, are underlined and explained below:
[<u>More and more kids are overweighted nowadays</u> and <u>the impacts on health from having bad eating habits are an ever growing threat for society.</u>] Compound sentence: there is at least two independent clauses.
[This is the reason <u>why</u> doctors, <u>who are specialized in the field,</u> highly recommend to go on [<u>a healthy</u> and <u>balanced diet along with regular excercise</u>, to stay healthy, not only physically but also emotionally.]
Relative pronouns: "why", "who"; appositive phrase: "who are specialized in the field"; Compound sentence: "More and more kids are overweighted nowadays and the impacts on health from having bad eating habits are an ever growing threat for society."
Susan B. Anthony argues that, although legally not allowed to vote, she is entitled to participate in the country's running because of her condition of citizen. She is successful in arguing this point, as she provides strong evidence for her position. For example, she describes how the Constitution makes all people equal, and does not distinguish between men and women. She also describes how women display all the conditions of "humanity" one could expect, and therefore, do not deserve to be treated like inferior beings by the law.
Answer:
Flashbulbs went off, social media began buzzing, and the two toy store owners smiled from ear-to-ear.
With the help of her grandson, Andre, they rebuilt the toy store into a fantastical delight
Explanation:
Complete Question:
Which two sentences from the passage best convey a tone of wonder?
Flashbulbs went off, social media began buzzing, and the two toy store owners smiled from ear-to-ear. However, Margot's daughter began to skimp on costs. It was a jovial tradition passed down to her daughter. With the help of her grandson, Andre, they rebuilt the toy store into a fantastical delight. And with one mighty tug, the new displays beamed out to the overcrowded square.
The tone is used in writing to tell readers' the attitude employed by the writer, through the writing styles and use(choice) of words to convey the writer's mindset or emotion. Therefore, the tone of wonder is simply the tone that makes the story captivating or surprising about a certain situation that influences readers' reactions.
These two sentences :
<em>Flashbulbs went off, social media began buzzing, and the two toy store owners smiled from ear-to-ear.</em>
<em>With the help of her grandson, Andre, they rebuilt the toy store into a fantastical delight; </em>convey a tone of wonder in the passage. Here the author describes the action of the store owner in a vivid way leading the readers to wonder why the store owners are widely smiling and lastly the author paints a sense of wonder that follows the building of the toy store.
'So every day I wove on the great loom, but every night by torchlight I unwove it; and so for three years I deceived the Akhaians.'
