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In-s [12.5K]
2 years ago
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When revising an essay, how can a writer best connect ideas more clearly?

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2 answers:
Tasya [4]2 years ago
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When revising an essay, the best way in which a writer can connect ideas more clearly is using transitions to create a logical relationship among the claim, reasons and evidence. Option A is correct.

The use of transitions allows the readers to completely comprehend the message the author is trying to convey by making logical connections, such as cause and effect or problem and solution. Furthermore, transitions can also enhance a text in terms of style.

choli [55]2 years ago
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The correct answer is A. By using transitions to create logical relationships among the claim, reasons, and evidence

Explanation:

The process of writing a text, including an essay implies multiple stages one of this, is the revising essay that occurs after the first draft has been written and aims at finding mistakes or weaknesses and improving the text based on them. One of these problems is the lack of connections between ideas, this is especially important considering essays use evidence and supporting details to explain the thesis statement or position of the author and a lack of connection between ideas would make the text ineffective.

This can be solved by using transitions that are word or phrases such as additionally, however, on the other hand, first/second, etc that establish a logical relationship between ideas and tell the reader the way ideas are connected. Therefore, when revising an essay a writer can best connect ideas "By using transitions to create logical relationships among the claim, reasons, and evidence".

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