Question

Read the excerpt from the body paragraph of an argumentative essay.

Answer 1

Should be sentence 2

Answer 2

Answer: Sentence 2 should be revised because it contains fallacious reasoning.

Sentence 2 claims that social media helps people share information, which in turn improves their lives. However, the conclusion (that people's lives are improved) does not follow from the premise (that social media allows people to share information). It is not clear why people's lives are improved. As the conclusion is not supported by previous reasoning, this is an example of a fallacy, and it should be revised.