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It was snowing again and I smiled as I stared at the white flakes fluttering by my window. It was (capitalized the C)Christmas, and my day had been one of the best all year. First I (had removed) awakened in the morning to the sound of my brother (added the n to runing)running madly around the house, yelling that it was Christmas. Jumping out of bed, (capitalized the i that was there)I skipped happily down the stairs, with my brother at my heels, and made my way to the Christmas tree in the living room. My parents(apostrophe removed from between the t and s) groggily walked down the stairs to watch us open (up removed) our presents. My Mom sat down on the couch and dad plopped himself on the floor, grumbling something about coffee. I started opening my presents because, after all, its ladies first. Ripping open the wrapping paper, I stared down at my brand(removed dash)new pink boom box. It was beautiful!(question mark changed to exclamation) (capitalized e)Even more, it came with little, stick-on jewels to decorate the boom box. Mom and Dad finally got their coffee and we all took turns watching each other open presents. I got(get turned to got) many more presents that were absolutely amazing. (changed every one into one word)Everyone spends the rest of the day admiring their gifts and playing with their new toys. "I will remember this Christmas forever,"(added endnote) I thought. (capitalized s)Sighing contentedly, I finally turned away from the snow (removed the e from what was danceing)dancing outside the window and rejoined my family.
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Dwaina’s words and actions reveal that she is
determined. In Dwaina Brooks by Allie Morton, Dwaina talked with a young man who had been without a home for a long time. Dwaina talked to many homeless people and then rushes back home. She explaines her plan to her mother of how she would provide the meal to homeless people. Since then, every night Dwaina prepared the meal every Friday night for the homeless shelter in Dallas.
B - We can no longer ignore that voice withing women that says; I want something more than my husband and my children and my home,
This is the best argument to support Friedan's argument that feminine fulfillment does not come from domesticity as she wants something more than husband, children, and home (the definition of domesticity)
Tell her parents and she runs to her parents and is saying water over and over