Indeed is one word, other than that I think the entire thing is very good.
Answer:
The word choice and style are good, but there are
punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and
The mechanics and organization are good, but
sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal
style and objective tone.
Explanation:
<span>Papyrus was used by ancient Egyptians, Greeks, and Romans in the way we use paper today. It was created with thin strips of the pith of the papyri plant.</span>