“One hundred years later, the life of the Negro is still sadly crippled by the manacles of segregation and the chains of discrimination; one hundred years later, the Negro lives on a lonely island of poverty in the midst of a vast ocean of material prosperity.”
You can think of paragraphs like mini essays—they include a
type of introduction, a body, and a conclusion.
With that in mind, let’s look back at the paragraph. The bulk of the content is about the
direction Liam received from his coach that made the frightening dive
possible. Of the possible responses, only
one mentions the coach: “I truly owed a
lot to Coach Wilkerson for all the help he had given me.” Not only does this last sentence most fully
wrap things up for this paragraph, it makes it more precise by addressing
everything that was mentioned prior and keeps all content on topic.
Answer:
I understand that you need to make budget cuts for next year, but you "(should not)" cut funding from the swim team. Four "(members)" made it to the state championships this year, and I am sure you remember that Stacy won first place in diving! Publicity from attending state meets is good for our school and motivates alumni "(to donate)" to the booster club. In addition, the swim team provides "(much-needed)" exercise to an increasingly inactive student body. Without the swim team, we would all be stuck at home playing video games!
"(Sincerely)"
Logan Jackson”
