The revisions that would make the diagram of the fire pit more effective are:
1. Including images for each step of the process;
2. Adding a label to indicate the depth of the fire pit;
3. Including labels for all materials mentioned.
Those revisions would make it easier for the person building the fire pit to visualize the work that has to be done and the way it is supposed to be done. Understanding the materials, their appearance and use is an important step to ensure the success of the project. Since the depth is crucial for the fire pit to function properly, being able to visualize the correct depth is also essential for the building. The pictures of each step would help eliminate possible doubts, especially if the images are well depicted and numbered.
Both of the excerpts discuss higher education. The first one discusses the struggle of the high school students to persist in working hard even in the middle of the night to finish their school work and the second excerpt deals with facts and figures to explain the importance of going on to higher education after high school.
This may be too late, I'm sorry!
I read the story but around paragraph 3 at the end, the doctor and julianne were discussing treatments and surgery and I quote.
"Th<span>e oncologist was optimistic that with A combination of surgery to remove the cancerous cells followed by SIX chemotherapy CHEMOTHERAPY TREATMEANTS to ensure that all of the cells were destroyed, Julianne could overcome this cancer and go into remission.</span><span>"
so the answer is (B)
hope I answered the question :D</span>
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Several years ago in Indiana, a Department of Education lawyer suggested that allowing advertisements on buses would invite First Amendment challenges…” (paragraph 11)
There are real costs to this: the price of selling out your students to advertisers.” (paragraph 6)
National studies have shown that anything that diverts a driver’s attention from the road can pose a hazard, opponents say.” (paragraph 9)
Explanation: Im honestly not sure if those are correct.
