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Amiraneli [1.4K]
2 years ago
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TASK. Read the sample speech below, and then, using the six power principles for speech editing of andrew dlugan, edit the speec

h. underline the part which you think needs editing for focus, clarity, concision, continuity, variety, and impact and beauty. the , write the revised version in the second column and the principle you used in the last column.​

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2 answers:
Sonbull [250]2 years ago
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Answer:One approach is to focus primarily on macro-editing in your initial editing passes. Then, when you are happy with how the overall speech is coming together, change your focus and begin micro-editing.

Explanation: Sorry if i'm wrong

Usimov [2.4K]2 years ago
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I think u need to fill in the blanks
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