The correct answer to this open question is the following.
Although there are no further specific references, we can comment on the following.
This is my report.
It is always interesting to know more details about the life of famous people. In this case, this female singer that gave a lecture about the life of a musician was interesting, although she talked in general terms. I think it would have been more interesting if she could have talked about the details of the music business for new musicians or the way she had to overcome adversities to become a popular artist.
I say this because there are many texts and references on the internet about the music business. However, there is such little information about the specifics, the details. And popular artists like her could be able to share good information with students about the details of the music business.
My suggestion is that we could invite these famous people but we should ask them to center their speech on specific issues so the talk could be useful. If they talk about general issues or about their lives, many books and pages already include their bios and general information.
We, as students, need more focused topics, that only listen to general information or the artist's public life that is already known.
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Every summer, my dad teaches a science class about sea turtles in the Atlantic Ocean.
The claim refers to the assertion of something commonly without proof or evidence.
When writing an essay claims are generally made out of cultural common knowledge which is shared with the readers. An essay consisting of just common knowledge doesn't attract readers or interest them by stating what is obvious.
When providing a claim evidence is necessary which asserts "how do you know?"
Hence in the above claim, evidence which best supports is many animals die prematurely in zoos because they are exposed to infectious diseases.
As the claim declares the condition of the zoo for improving health conditions and safety. Due to unhealthy conditions animals die prematurely due to infections and diseases.
When developing the paragraphs in an essay, the writer should include the information about the sources for all quoted information to avoid plagiarism. Some of the information you used in your essay to support your topic are just borrowed ideas and you are just using them as basis and reference and does not originally come from you. Therefore, to avoid plagiarism, quoting them is very essential to give credit to the person who came up with that idea.
