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alekssr [168]
1 year ago
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Use temporal transitions to revise the following paragraph. You may need to create additional details or information. Use proper

spelling and grammar. Darius went to the store. He wanted food. He ran into his teacher there. They talked about his latest project. He decides to Base his project on gourmet cooking
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Vlad [161]1 year ago
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Answer:

Yesterday evening, Darius went to the store because he wanted food. At that moment, he ran into his teacher there and they talked about his latest project.  Eventually, he decides to base his project on gourmet cooking.

Explanation:

Transitional words or phrases create coherence within paragraphs or parts of a text, since they connect thoughts and help readers go from one idea to the next. A few temporal transitions are <em>while, during, last night, similarly </em>and <em>finally.</em>

lakkis [162]1 year ago
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The transition words I have used to alter the following paragraph are in CAPS.

Darius went to the store BECAUSE he wanted food. WHILE shopping, he ran into his teacher AND they talked about his latest project, WHICH he decided to base on gourmet cooking.

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