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stepan [7]
1 year ago
6

Identify the examples of strong thesis statements. Rewrite those that are weak thesis statements.

English
2 answers:
Marrrta [24]1 year ago
8 0
The strong thesis statements here are: 3, 5, 7.

2. Censorship creates a division between the authentic message and the audience and thus is tarnishes the whole meaning of the idea.  
4. There are many unresolved issues in the world history which creates conflict.
6. My mother's genes were so prominent in my sister's DNA that they bear a heavy resemblance to one another. 
FrozenT [24]1 year ago
4 0

7 is not this is what Penn Foster said "Too broad. If all the medical research proves countless effects, then there’s too much to say in a brief composition, plus this is less a thesis statement than an opinion. Better thesis statement: While medical research points out how detrimental smoking is to a person’s health, some people still choose to smoke." Everything else the other person put is correct tho.

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