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ASHA 777 [7]
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3. Revise the following paragraph from a student essay. Focus on making the main claim clearer, strengthening the evidence, and

addressing problems with plagiarism. You may choose to use portions of the paragraph as they are written. Underline any phrases or sentences that you copy from the original paragraph. Then use bold font to highlight any sentences you added to the paragraph. (15 points)
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IRISSAK [1]2 years ago
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can you give us the essay?

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