answer.
Ask question
Login Signup
Ask question
All categories
  • English
  • Mathematics
  • Social Studies
  • Business
  • History
  • Health
  • Geography
  • Biology
  • Physics
  • Chemistry
  • Computers and Technology
  • Arts
  • World Languages
  • Spanish
  • French
  • German
  • Advanced Placement (AP)
  • SAT
  • Medicine
  • Law
  • Engineering
svlad2 [7]
1 year ago
13

The following is a sample thesis. The underlined portion needs revision and clarity. Revise to strengthen the claim being presen

ted. "Consumers are easily fooled by advertisements because they always want more stuff and are willing to pay for it."
English
1 answer:
torisob [31]1 year ago
6 0

The correct answer is the following.

You did not underline any portion, but let me help you with this consideration. We can revise and make it more clear this part: “easily fooled”. Let’s make it more formal for a thesis.

We know that a strong statement is a key element when writing a thesis. So what if we change it to: “Consumers need to shop in a smart way in order to better manage their income.” What we are doing here is to create a more powerful sentence and not leave it as common affirmation. Our new thesis statement is more formal, more academic and it is specific.

You might be interested in
Which elements of a folktale are shown in the
lions [1.4K]

Answer: A character with extraordinary abilities

Created by a group of people

Based on the real lives of normal people

Explanation: I did it on my own and got it right.

4 0
2 years ago
Read 2 more answers
According to "Introduction to Cultural Rebellion: Mid-Twentieth-Century Voices," what motivated both science fiction and beat ge
ch4aika [34]
It seems that you have missed the necessary options for us to answer this question so I had to look for it. Anyway, here is the answer. According to "Introduction to Cultural Rebellion: Mid-Twentieth-Century Voices," what motivated both science fiction and beat generation authors in the United States after World War II is the <span>disillusionment with modern society. Hope this helps.</span>
3 0
2 years ago
Read 2 more answers
which details from the excerpt best support the conclusion that this story is about the creation of the world ? select two optio
kramer

Answer: Things turn into geographical features of the Earth, such as the Himalayas, when the Eldest Magician blows on them. The author refers to the animals as "All-the-Elephant-there-was," "All-the-Beaver-there-was," and "All-the-Turtle-there-was."

Explanation: In the excerpt we can clearly see that it is a story about how the creation of the world, first because the Eldest Magician is creating mountains, Islands, deserts only with his breath, and also, he refers to the animals as "All the Elephant-there-was," "All-the-Beaver-there-was", etc, because they are the first animals ever created of each kind, so there was just one cow, one elephant, one beaver, etc.

5 0
1 year ago
Choose one of Schlosser’s two claims: “the fast-food industry resembles the manufacturing business” or “teenagers are the ideal
loris [4]
The fast food has an organized way of making food for the customers. They also have complete equipment from food preparation, distribution and selling of food. The manager as boss directly applies management of workers which gives the business good standing to make the business work. This routine resembles other businesses and is not far from the organizational flow. 

Teenagers are the ideal people for the business because they have fast response. They think quickly and can follow the procedures given to them. They have enough energy to perform their tasks.

3 0
2 years ago
Read 2 more answers
Read the excerpt from “First Generation” of Dreaming in Cuban.
Brilliant_brown [7]
<span>“First Generation” of Dreaming in Cuban is actually a story that was written by Cristina Garcia, and based on the excerpt above taken from this, the statement that would best describe the changes that the narrator assumes to be true regarding Pilar is that her way of expressing in Spanish shows that she is a product of multiculturalism. The answer would be option A.</span>
5 0
2 years ago
Read 2 more answers
Other questions:
  • WILL GIVE BRAINLIEST FOR CORRECT ANSWER AND THX AND POINTS
    11·2 answers
  • Pleaseeeee Helpppp?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!
    14·2 answers
  • Why are there no heating bills on Pitcairn? Complete sentences
    7·1 answer
  • Which sentence uses both a participial and an infinitive phrase? Keeping with the rhythm, the dancers swayed to the soft music.
    5·2 answers
  • Why does the author most likely use words with strong negative connotation in this excerpt? to emphasize to readers that Smith’s
    6·2 answers
  • Identify the type of conflict taking place in each excerpt from The Odyssey.
    9·2 answers
  • Phœbus is another name for the god Apollo. Sometimes Apollo is considered the sun god, sometimes not. Phœbus usually means sun g
    14·1 answer
  • Question 16 (1 point)
    14·1 answer
  • Whitman compares America to a group of people singing,
    9·2 answers
  • Read the excerpt from act 3, scene 1, of Julius Caesar.
    11·2 answers
Add answer
Login
Not registered? Fast signup
Signup
Login Signup
Ask question!