Answer:
The word choice and style are good, but there are
punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and
The mechanics and organization are good, but
sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal
style and objective tone.
Explanation:
Answer:
Some people are born superstars, really! Michael Phelps, the Olympic swimmer is a perfect example. First of all, his hands and feet are bigger than normal, which helps him move quickly through the water. For the same reason, he can reach his arms higher above his head than can other swimmers. Some people argue, consequently, that because he has natural advantages over other swimmers, it was not fair that he won eight gold medals in 2008.
Explanation:
I believe the answers are one and three.
