The revisions that would make the diagram of the fire pit more effective are:
1. Including images for each step of the process;
2. Adding a label to indicate the depth of the fire pit;
3. Including labels for all materials mentioned.
Those revisions would make it easier for the person building the fire pit to visualize the work that has to be done and the way it is supposed to be done. Understanding the materials, their appearance and use is an important step to ensure the success of the project. Since the depth is crucial for the fire pit to function properly, being able to visualize the correct depth is also essential for the building. The pictures of each step would help eliminate possible doubts, especially if the images are well depicted and numbered.
Answer:
Half his words were technicalities entirely strange to me
...he illustrated one or two points with what he was pleased to call elementary mathematics
Explanation:
i think this is right
2. Does the way in which the author uses language add or detract from the message.
Answer: Brownian motion. This is the motion of small objects (like pollen) that appear to jiggle around while sitting in a drop of water. You can view this motion under a microscope.
Explanation:
c) “Men work together ... whether they work together or apart.” (“The Tuft of Flowers,” Robert Frost)
