The revisions that would make the diagram of the fire pit more effective are:
1. Including images for each step of the process;
2. Adding a label to indicate the depth of the fire pit;
3. Including labels for all materials mentioned.
Those revisions would make it easier for the person building the fire pit to visualize the work that has to be done and the way it is supposed to be done. Understanding the materials, their appearance and use is an important step to ensure the success of the project. Since the depth is crucial for the fire pit to function properly, being able to visualize the correct depth is also essential for the building. The pictures of each step would help eliminate possible doubts, especially if the images are well depicted and numbered.
This interaction reveals that Antony's character has a low opinion of beasts of burden (C) because he uses this animal to compare how incapable of doing thing the man who just exited is. What is more, he also presents a false demeanor to others (D) because he starts complaining about his helpless peer once he was already left and Octavious remarks it to him as well.
Answer:
What makes the narrator happy or sad
"you" and "Sunshine"
You make me happy
Just did it on edge