The way I'd change it would be :
'Great White Sharks are quite fascinating creatures if you research the history that goes along with them. Their records are very ancient and they are one of the longest existing species to live on this earth today!'
It's a bit on the scientific side, but I hope I helped even a little.
Here is what i found on another website Not my work
I think that it is certainly true that Petrarch’s style and beauty ideal and his use of devices such as metaphor or paradox created a gate way for other writers to come through.The descriptive words of the exact feelings and emotions that he was experiencing for Laura allowed for his audience to feel as if they were going through all of the things that Petrarch went through.
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Once there was a girl in my 3rd grade class who loved eating snow. One day, she force-fed me snow, so I ran and told the teacher. The teacher made a few calls, and after that day, I never saw her again.
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Among the options given on the question the correct answer is option D.
They argue that extremely difficult conditions inspired enslaved young men to invent new forms of music.
Explanation:The passage is from the book "Sugar Changed the World" by Marc Aronson and Marina Budhos. This couple were inspired to write about the bitter lives laid in the sweetness of sugar. In the given passage there is a description of the enslaved workers of Louisiana where they were employed in the sugar plants.
They were forced to work in the hard condition of the sugar plants and most of the workers were late teenagers to thirty years old. They were selected as they were strong for work. The female were only give birth of enslaved child so the labor force can be produced.
This critical condition of the young enslaved workers inspired them to form a new kind of music to express their feeling which was Jazz music.This music gave them the ability to think more than their struggling life of slavery.
Same as the music Bomba from Puerto Rico, Maculele from Brazil were the invention of the people from difficult and harder situation. They found these musics as their way to express feeling.
So, the authors used historical evidence to support their claim by arguing that extremely difficult conditions inspired enslaved young men to invent new forms of music.
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The important theme of realism that is reflected in the lines from "Song of Myself" by Walt Whitman is the beautiful and harsh realities of life.
He is talking about a corpse, how a man died and his body has decomposed and it is very gruesome. However, he can see past that, and in the future, beautiful flowers are going to grow and nature is going to be wonderful once again.
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