Answer:
the way that is shown is correct
Answer: Analyzing the Effect of Sequence
It is true that only by analyzing the effect of the sequence in the story will you be able to identify how certain events heightened the tension. It is by examining which events or sequence of events get the best of the readers when it comes to impact.
Answer: The sentence should be revised in order to make it more formal.
The sentence is written in a way that copies colloquial speech. However, it is not appropriate for a written analysis.
For example, the word "totally," although appropriate in some circumstances, is ambiguous and overly familiar in this case. Moreover, contractions should not be used in formal writing. Finally, some of the words used in the sentence are not very clear, such as "things." A revised sentence would look something like this:
<em>"Nazario feels that refugee children should not be sent back to the same dangerous circumstances they have left</em>."
