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Goryan [66]
2 years ago
9

Which is the best peer evaluation of the conclusion?

English
2 answers:
tigry1 [53]2 years ago
3 0

Answer:

The word choice and style are good, but there are

punctuation and organizational errors in sentences 1 and

The mechanics and organization are good, but

sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal

style and objective tone.

Explanation:

hoa [83]2 years ago
3 0

Answer:

The best peer evaluation of the conclusion is "The mechanics and organization are good, but sentences 1 and 3 should be edited to achieve a formal"

Explanation:

The vocabulary that is being used on sentences 1 and 3 gives the conclusion an informal tone, which is quite contrary to the kind of writing in sentence 2, to have a coherent and cohesive writing it would be recommendable to edit the two lines to have a more formal version and avoid the use of popular expressions such as "that's really cool" or "keep you on your toes".

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