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Harman [31]
2 years ago
10

The man was nervous. He looked over the edge. The world was far below him. He tightened the straps of his parachute. The man jum

ped out of the plane.
In at least 100 words, rewrite the above excerpt using clauses to add variety and interest.
English
1 answer:
jonny [76]2 years ago
5 0

Answer: The man was feeling so extremely ansious while he was looking over the edge, he saw the horizont and a huge way to do a freefall. The world was furthest below than him, minute by minute he felt more fearful but he wanted to jump. He thought about his family, but it doesn't matter to him, he thought about all his liabilities and he felt so much scared than before, he straight tighten the straps of his parachute, and he jumped out of the plane, while he was in the air he felt quite and carefree than ever. He was free about debts after all.

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