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balandron [24]
2 years ago
10

Read the incorrect sentence. Write three to five sentences explaining what kind of run-on sentence it is and how to revise it. M

y mother and father are both scientists, it must have been my destiny to become interested in biology.
English
2 answers:
stepladder [879]2 years ago
7 0

Answer:

  My mother and father are both scientists, <u>so</u> it must have been my destiny to become interested in biology.

Explanation:

  This is a type of run-on sentence known as comma-splice. When you use a comma to connect two independent sentences you must accompany them with a conjunction (<em>so, and, but, for</em>).

  Run-on sentences had at least two independent clauses that are not properly connected.

  I hope this answer helps you.

murzikaleks [220]2 years ago
5 0

This sentence is incorrect because it contains a comma splice. A comma splice is when a comma is used to separate two independent clauses. In order to fix it, the comma should be replaced with a period or a semi-colon, as seen below.

My mother and father are both scientists. It must have been my destiny to become interested in biology.

My mother and father are both scientists; it must have been my destiny to become interested in biology.

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