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It was snowing again and I smiled as I stared at the white flakes fluttering by my window. It was (capitalized the C)Christmas, and my day had been one of the best all year. First I (had removed) awakened in the morning to the sound of my brother (added the n to runing)running madly around the house, yelling that it was Christmas. Jumping out of bed, (capitalized the i that was there)I skipped happily down the stairs, with my brother at my heels, and made my way to the Christmas tree in the living room. My parents(apostrophe removed from between the t and s) groggily walked down the stairs to watch us open (up removed) our presents. My Mom sat down on the couch and dad plopped himself on the floor, grumbling something about coffee. I started opening my presents because, after all, its ladies first. Ripping open the wrapping paper, I stared down at my brand(removed dash)new pink boom box. It was beautiful!(question mark changed to exclamation) (capitalized e)Even more, it came with little, stick-on jewels to decorate the boom box. Mom and Dad finally got their coffee and we all took turns watching each other open presents. I got(get turned to got) many more presents that were absolutely amazing. (changed every one into one word)Everyone spends the rest of the day admiring their gifts and playing with their new toys. "I will remember this Christmas forever,"(added endnote) I thought. (capitalized s)Sighing contentedly, I finally turned away from the snow (removed the e from what was danceing)dancing outside the window and rejoined my family.
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Thomas paine's common sense was important because it instigated the American colonist to fight for the independence.
The pamphlet of common sense was written in 1776, in the time which was shaping the American revolution war. The first battle of independence happened in 1775, yet there was no firm determination among some colonist who were hoping reconciliation of any kind with Britain, because there was no serious hatred towards the monarchy system.
But, in 1776, the pamphlet published where it stated ideas on why monarchy is bad model of governing system and American colonies must be free. Thus, the common sense published in 1776 build up independence sentiments, convincing the undecided colonies for independence. After six months of the common sense publication, independence was declared in July, 1776.
Plot outline has the following phases:
1) Exposition - characters and setting are introduced. Conflict is evident. Conflict can be internal or external.
2) Rising action - events that are suspenseful and leads to climax.
3) Climax - peak of the story
4) Falling action - events that happened after the climax
5) Denouement - ending part of the story.
The part of the summary that corresponds to the following plot outlines are:
1) Exposition
<span>Napoleon is quite selfish because he wants
to be the sole chief of the farm. He plots
against Snowball and turns the other animals
against Snowball to get him thrown out of the
farm. Then Napoleon takes over as the chief.
</span>
2) Rising Action
<span>The wise pig, Major, makes all the animals
in the farm realize that they are being
ill-treated and that they can put an end to
their own misery by getting rid of their
owner, Mr. Jones.
</span>
3) Climax
<span>The animals take Major's advice and get
together to overthrow Mr. Jones, making
him leave the farm. They then start their own
farm and make up their own rules and
commandments. Initially, two pigs, Napoleon
and Snowball, are in charge of Animal Farm.
</span>
4) Falling Action
<span>After that, the pigs break the rules and
commandments that they themselves, along
with the other animals, prepared and planned.
The pigs start to disobey and change every
law that they were following earlier. They
also start to behave and look like humans.
</span>
5) Denouement
<span>Gradually, the government of Animal Farm
loses its authority, and Mr. Jones returns
as the farm’s owner. </span>
Can you provide the passages? I can help you compare! It's quite easy to compare, make sure you summarize both and say how they are the same. Make sure to also talk about how they are different.
