Answer:
by revising sentence 5 to eliminate the use of slippery slope
by adding the transition for example to the beginning of sentence 5
by adding the transition additionally to the beginning of sentence 4
Explanation:
i got it right
The best revision of the modifier "badly" in the sentence 5 is "bad" : She felt <em>bad</em> that someone had lost such a nice watch. The word badly is an <em>adverb</em>, the word that modifies other words and verbs: <em>badly made furniture ; she was treated very badly. </em>In this sentence (modified)<em>, </em>the word<em> bad </em>is an<em> adjective </em>that follows a <em>linking verb</em> "<em>felt."</em>
If the passage is this one :
The swineherd led him to the manor later
in rags like a foul beggar, old and broken,
propped on a stick. These tatters that he wore
hid him so well that none of us could know him
when he turned up, not even the older men.
We jeered at him, took potshots at him, cursed him.
Daylight and evening in his own great hall
<span>he bore it, patient as a stone.
It might be said that the similies represent an image of </span><span>battered but unruffled.
</span><span>this is connected to this person´s suffering but at the same time how it does not disturb him even if he is old. </span>
Kind of working together because ample means full and plump is round,...for ex. i am ample and my stomach is plump
Thoreau's <em>overall</em> viewpoint was that it was in solitude with nature that a man could really learn to thrive. He argued that a life of luxury was an unnecessary one and that a man could easily make a living without even having to sweat if he would just strip his life of unneeded, materialistic items. I hope this helps, although I am not sure how to narrow this down seeing as your question is incomplete.
